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<listitem><para>Step-by-step instructions if those instructions exist in other Yocto
Project documentation.
For example, the Yocto Project Application Developer's Guide contains detailed
- instruction on how to run the
+ instructions on how to run the
<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_ADT_URL;#installing-the-adt'>Installing the ADT and Toolchains</ulink>,
which is used to set up a cross-development environment.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Reference material.
@@ -96,8 +96,9 @@
<title>Other Information</title>
<para>
- Because this manual presents overview information for many different topics, you will
- need to supplement it with other information.
+ Because this manual presents overview information for many different
+ topics, supplemental information is recommended for full
+ comprehension.
The following list presents other sources of information you might find helpful:
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;'>Yocto Project Website</ulink>:
@@ -105,7 +106,7 @@
as well as links to software and documentation.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_QS_URL;'>Yocto Project Quick Start</ulink>:</emphasis> This short document lets you get started
- with the Yocto Project quickly and start building an image.</para></listitem>
+ with the Yocto Project and quickly begin building an image.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;'>Yocto Project Reference Manual</ulink>:</emphasis> This manual is a reference
guide to the OpenEmbedded build system known as "Poky."
@@ -169,7 +170,7 @@
OpenEmbedded build system (Poky).
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><ulink url='&YOCTO_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/yocto-announce'></ulink>
- for a mailing list to receive official Yocto Project announcements for developments and
+ for a mailing list to receive official Yocto Project announcements
as well as Yocto Project milestones.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><ulink url='&YOCTO_LISTS_URL;/listinfo'></ulink> for a
listing of all public mailing lists on <filename>lists.yoctoproject.org</filename>.
@@ -182,7 +183,7 @@
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>
The build system used by the Yocto Project.
- This project is the upstream, generic, embedded distribution from which the Yocto
+ This project is the upstream, generic, embedded distribution that the Yocto
Project derives its build system (Poky) from and to which it contributes.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='http://developer.berlios.de/projects/bitbake/'>
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