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authorScott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>2011-11-10 13:28:32 -0800
committerRichard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>2011-11-25 15:24:17 +0000
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documentation/dev-manual: Edits from Tom Zanussi.
Tom Zanussi provided a review up through part of the "model" chapter. I have implemented his comments mosty verbatim. Reported-by: Tom Zanussi (From yocto-docs rev: 693d4fadd4b34ffef9953fb1850d381ff7c028a3) Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com> Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
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@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Information that lets you get set
up to develop using the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
- <listitem><para>Information to help developers that are new to the open source environment
+ <listitem><para>Information to help developers who are new to the open source environment
and to the distributed revision control system Git, which the Yocto Project
uses.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>An understanding of common end-to-end development models.</para></listitem>
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Step-by-step instructions if those instructions exist in other Yocto
Project documentation.
- For example, The Application Development Toolkit (ADT) User’s Guide contains detailed
+ For example, the Application Development Toolkit (ADT) User’s Guide contains detailed
instruction on how to obtain and configure the
<trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark> Yocto Plug-in.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Reference material.
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
OpenedHand has since been acquired by Intel Corporation.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='http://www.intel.com/'>Intel Corporation</ulink>:</emphasis>
- The company who acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and continues development on the
+ The company that acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and continues development on the
Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>
<ulink url='http://www.openembedded.org/'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>
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