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authorbmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org>2004-04-11 23:49:16 +0000
committerbmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org>2004-04-11 23:49:16 +0000
commitc0887ea782ac4eee837d6fc23120167292d94cc0 (patch)
tree65aab9ffcc7664334be4b815a0069c9aacc1defd /release
parentcfce98c517b5e0f033ef97e157a9b0095ebecb1c (diff)
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Fix some minor grammar nits. Translators can probably ignore this.
Diffstat (limited to 'release')
-rw-r--r--release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml20
-rw-r--r--release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml20
2 files changed, 20 insertions, 20 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
index 8d92dae..498ae3c 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@
<para arch="i386">The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau
synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as
- <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged;
+ <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged;
<note>
<para>The driver name has changed, but the network interface still
- has <quote>ct</quote> name.</para>
+ has the <quote>ct</quote> name.</para>
</note>
</para>
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
<para>The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports
IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;</para>
- <para>A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
+ <para>A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
from working has been fixed. &merged;</para>
<para>Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
<para>The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.</para>
- <para>The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver
+ <para>The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver
has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down
the transmission rate. &merged;</para>
</sect3>
@@ -485,8 +485,8 @@
<para>&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a <option>-f</option> option
to work on files instead of disk partitions.</para>
- <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> and the
- <command>bthidd</command> which support Bluetooth
+ <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> command and the
+ <command>bthidd</command> command, which support Bluetooth
HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.</para>
<para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@
&man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.</para>
<para>The &man.find.1; now supports a option
- <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;</para>
+ <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;.</para>
<para>&man.indent.1; now supports a <option>-ldi</option> option
to control indentation of local variables. A number of other
@@ -602,17 +602,17 @@
role="package">net/nss_ldap</filename>) and groups with large
membership lists.</para>
- <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD
+ <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD,
have been added. They also support a <option>-M</option> option
to extract values associated with the name list from the
specified core instead of the default <filename>/dev/kmem</filename>,
and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para>
- <para>&man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility.
+ <para>&man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved.
The changes include <option>-p</option> for a list of process IDs,
<option>-t</option> for a list of terminal names,
- <option>-A</option> which is equivalent with <option>-ax</option>,
+ <option>-A</option> which is equivalent to <option>-ax</option>,
<option>-G</option> for a list of group IDs,
<option>-X</option> which is the opposite of <option>-x</option>,
and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;.
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
index 8d92dae..498ae3c 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@
<para arch="i386">The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau
synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as
- <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged;
+ <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged;
<note>
<para>The driver name has changed, but the network interface still
- has <quote>ct</quote> name.</para>
+ has the <quote>ct</quote> name.</para>
</note>
</para>
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
<para>The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports
IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;</para>
- <para>A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
+ <para>A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver
from working has been fixed. &merged;</para>
<para>Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
<para>The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.</para>
- <para>The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver
+ <para>The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver
has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down
the transmission rate. &merged;</para>
</sect3>
@@ -485,8 +485,8 @@
<para>&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a <option>-f</option> option
to work on files instead of disk partitions.</para>
- <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> and the
- <command>bthidd</command> which support Bluetooth
+ <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> command and the
+ <command>bthidd</command> command, which support Bluetooth
HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.</para>
<para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@
&man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.</para>
<para>The &man.find.1; now supports a option
- <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;</para>
+ <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;.</para>
<para>&man.indent.1; now supports a <option>-ldi</option> option
to control indentation of local variables. A number of other
@@ -602,17 +602,17 @@
role="package">net/nss_ldap</filename>) and groups with large
membership lists.</para>
- <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD
+ <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD,
have been added. They also support a <option>-M</option> option
to extract values associated with the name list from the
specified core instead of the default <filename>/dev/kmem</filename>,
and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from
the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para>
- <para>&man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility.
+ <para>&man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved.
The changes include <option>-p</option> for a list of process IDs,
<option>-t</option> for a list of terminal names,
- <option>-A</option> which is equivalent with <option>-ax</option>,
+ <option>-A</option> which is equivalent to <option>-ax</option>,
<option>-G</option> for a list of group IDs,
<option>-X</option> which is the opposite of <option>-x</option>,
and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;.
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