MFS: Minor style tweaks and markup fixes.

	obtaining.sgml:  1.1.2.1->1.1.2.2

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/obtaining.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/obtaining.sgml
index 93319cc4..f3d019b 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/obtaining.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/obtaining.sgml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ be the "Obtaining FreeBSD" section of RELNOTES.TXT.
 <sect1>
   <title>Obtaining &os;</title>
 
-  <para>You may obtain &os; in a variety of ways.  This section
+  <para>&os; may be obtained in a variety of ways.  This section
   focuses on those ways that are primarily of use for obtaining a
   complete &os; distribution, rather than updating an existing
   installation.  More information can be found in the <ulink
@@ -65,17 +65,22 @@ be the "Obtaining FreeBSD" section of RELNOTES.TXT.
 
     <para>You can use FTP to retrieve &os; and any or all of its
     optional packages from <ulink
-    url="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/">ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/</ulink>, which
+    url="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/"></ulink>, which
     is the
-    official &os; release site.</para>
-
-    <para>For other locations that mirror the &os; software see the
-    file <filename>MIRROR.SITES</filename>.  
-    Please FTP the distribution from the site
-    closest (in networking terms) to you.  Additional mirror sites are
-    always welcome!  
+    official &os; release site, or any of its <quote>mirrors</quote>.</para>
+
+    <para>Lists of locations that mirror &os;
+    can be found in the <ulink
+    url="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/mirrors.html#mirrors-ftp">FTP
+    Sites</ulink> section of the Handbook, or on the
+    <ulink url="http://www.freebsdmirrors.org/"></ulink> Web pages.
+    Finding a close (in networking terms) mirror from which to
+    download the distribution is highly recommended.</para>
+
+    <para>Additional mirror sites are
+    always welcome.
     Contact <email>freebsd-admin@FreeBSD.org</email> for more
-    details if you'd like to become an official mirror site.</para>
+    details on becoming an official mirror site.</para>
 
     <para>Mirrors generally contain the floppy disk images necessary
     to begin an installation, as well as the distribution files needed