Vendor import of llvm tags/RELEASE_33/final r183502 (effectively, 3.3

release):
http://llvm.org/svn/llvm-project/llvm/tags/RELEASE_33/final@183502

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/docs/DeveloperPolicy.rst b/docs/DeveloperPolicy.rst
index 43bdc85..0655559 100644
--- a/docs/DeveloperPolicy.rst
+++ b/docs/DeveloperPolicy.rst
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ quality patches.  If you would like commit access, please send an email to
    from, e.g. "J. Random Hacker <hacker@yoyodyne.com>".
 
 #. A "password hash" of the password you want to use, e.g. "``2ACR96qjUqsyM``".
-   Note that you don't ever tell us what your password is, you just give it to
+   Note that you don't ever tell us what your password is; you just give it to
    us in an encrypted form.  To get this, run "``htpasswd``" (a utility that
    comes with apache) in crypt mode (often enabled with "``-d``"), or find a web
    page that will do it for you.
@@ -269,17 +269,17 @@ Once you've been granted commit access, you should be able to check out an LLVM
 tree with an SVN URL of "https://username@llvm.org/..." instead of the normal
 anonymous URL of "http://llvm.org/...".  The first time you commit you'll have
 to type in your password.  Note that you may get a warning from SVN about an
-untrusted key, you can ignore this.  To verify that your commit access works,
+untrusted key; you can ignore this.  To verify that your commit access works,
 please do a test commit (e.g. change a comment or add a blank line).  Your first
 commit to a repository may require the autogenerated email to be approved by a
-mailing list.  This is normal, and will be done when the mailing list owner has
+mailing list.  This is normal and will be done when the mailing list owner has
 time.
 
 If you have recently been granted commit access, these policies apply:
 
 #. You are granted *commit-after-approval* to all parts of LLVM.  To get
    approval, submit a `patch`_ to `llvm-commits
-   <http://lists.cs.uiuc.edu/mailman/listinfo/llvm-commits>`_. When approved
+   <http://lists.cs.uiuc.edu/mailman/listinfo/llvm-commits>`_. When approved,
    you may commit it yourself.
 
 #. You are allowed to commit patches without approval which you think are
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ If you have recently been granted commit access, these policies apply:
 #. You are allowed to commit patches without approval to those portions of LLVM
    that you have contributed or maintain (i.e., have been assigned
    responsibility for), with the proviso that such commits must not break the
-   build.  This is a "trust but verify" policy and commits of this nature are
+   build.  This is a "trust but verify" policy, and commits of this nature are
    reviewed after they are committed.
 
 #. Multiple violations of these policies or a single egregious violation may
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ If you have recently been granted commit access, these policies apply:
 In any case, your changes are still subject to `code review`_ (either before or
 after they are committed, depending on the nature of the change).  You are
 encouraged to review other peoples' patches as well, but you aren't required
-to.
+to do so.
 
 .. _discuss the change/gather consensus: