- Use better terminology when describing mutex operations in msleep(9)'s

  description.
- Remove some bogus commas.
- Use the past tense when referring to the removal of the sleep() function
  since it happened quite a while ago and since the previous sentence in the
  paragraph already uses the past tense.

Approved by:	re (rwatson)

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/share/man/man9/sleep.9 b/share/man/man9/sleep.9
index 0954ae2..272642f 100644
--- a/share/man/man9/sleep.9
+++ b/share/man/man9/sleep.9
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ The
 function is a variation on tsleep.
 The parameter
 .Ar mtx
-is a mutex, which will be exited before sleeping, and entered before
+is a mutex which will be released before sleeping and reacquired before
 .Fn msleep
 returns.
 If
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ includes the
 .Dv PDROP
 flag, the
 .Ar mtx
-parameter will not be entered before returning.
+parameter will not be reacquired before returning.
 The mutex is
 used to ensure that a condition can be checked atomically, and
 that the current process can be suspended without missing a
@@ -151,9 +151,9 @@ function appeared in
 The
 .Fn sleep
 function used to be the traditional form.
-It does not let you specify a timeout or a
+It did not let you specify a timeout or a
 .Ar wmesg ,
-hence it has been discontinued.
+hence it was discontinued.
 .Sh AUTHORS
 .An -nosplit
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