From 54956b8d506e42653d893764d5df27f1ce52a8be Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Robert P. J. Day" <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>
Date: Wed, 2 Nov 2011 13:05:20 -0700
Subject: documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml: Robert P. J. Edits

Robert isolated a few technical errors and made some other wording
suggestions.  I took the technical corrections and modified one
of his suggested wording changes.

(From yocto-docs rev: 3c6bbae05cdf2265e04d967050354ce75d62b4e2)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation')

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
index a5f3652..e9342d0 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
         While the Yocto Project does not provide a strict testing framework,
         it does provide or generate for you artifacts that let you perform target-level and 
         emulated testing and debugging.  
-        And, if you are an <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark>
+        Additionally, if you are an <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark>
         IDE user, you can install an Eclipse Yocto Plug-in to allow you to 
         develop within that familiar environment.
     </para>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
                         Once you have the tarball, just extract it into a directory of your choice.</para>
                         <para>For example, the following command extracts the Yocto Project 1.1 release tarball 
                         into the current working directory and sets up the Yocto Project file structure
-                        with a top-level directory named <filename>poky-1.1</filename>:
+                        with a top-level directory named <filename>poky-edison-6.0</filename>:
                         <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ tar xfj poky-edison-6.0.tar.bz2
                         </literallayout></para>
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
                         <filename>meta-intel</filename>
                         Git repository inside the <filename>poky</filename> Git repository.
                         <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-     $cd poky
+     $ cd poky
      $ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/meta-intel.git
      Initialized empty Git repository in /home/scottrif/poky/meta-intel/.git/
      remote: Counting objects: 1325, done.
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
             <listitem><para>Optionally ensure the <filename>conf/local.conf</filename> configuration file is set 
                 up how you want it.  
                 This file defines the target machine architecture and other build options.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para>Build the image using the BitBake command.  
+            <listitem><para>Build the image using the <command>bitbake</command> command.
                 If you want information on Bitbake, see the user manual at 
                 <ulink url='http://docs.openembedded.org/bitbake/html'></ulink>.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Run the image either on the actual hardware or using the QEMU 
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