From a3483ac2d7eb6c19372be10483ab7c4303909e84 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: gnn <gnn@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2006 13:02:00 +0000
Subject: Clean up some descriptions and remove ambiguities in the language.
 Add explanations to the examples.

MFC after:	1 week
---
 lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3 | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3')

diff --git a/lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3 b/lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3
index 982d195..d162fa6 100644
--- a/lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3
+++ b/lib/libipsec/ipsec_strerror.3
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd May 6, 1998
+.Dd February 14, 2006
 .Dt IPSEC_STRERROR 3
 .Os
 .\"
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm ipsec_strerror
-.Nd error message for IPsec policy manipulation library
+.Nd error messages for the IPsec policy manipulation library
 .\"
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .In netinet6/ipsec.h
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ declares
 .Dl extern int ipsec_errcode;
 .Pp
 which is used to pass an error code from IPsec policy manipulation library
-to an user program.
+to a user program.
 The
 .Fn ipsec_strerror
 function can be used to obtain the error message string for the error code.
@@ -59,19 +59,19 @@ Since
 .Fn ipsec_strerror
 uses
 .Xr strerror 3
-as underlying function, calling
+as an underlying function, calling
 .Xr strerror 3
 after
 .Fn ipsec_strerror
-would make the return value from
+would overwrite the the return value from
 .Fn ipsec_strerror
-invalid, or overwritten.
+and make it invalid.
 .\"
 .Sh RETURN VALUES
 The
 .Fn ipsec_strerror
 function always returns a pointer to C string.
-The C string must not be overwritten by user programs.
+The C string must not be overwritten by the caller.
 .\"
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr ipsec_set_policy 3
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