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author | brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> | 2003-02-13 12:02:51 +0000 |
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committer | brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> | 2003-02-13 12:02:51 +0000 |
commit | e7ee23843ea11888a913445b9eaf14fe36aeec32 (patch) | |
tree | d71453e71d528ad9816cb03808ef9a3aa779b92e /share | |
parent | 83fce684ee8d08c162a07e5b54c646f9d87a432e (diff) | |
download | FreeBSD-src-e7ee23843ea11888a913445b9eaf14fe36aeec32.zip FreeBSD-src-e7ee23843ea11888a913445b9eaf14fe36aeec32.tar.gz |
Various spelling and grammar fixes
PR: 44312
Submitted by: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
MFC after: 3 days
Diffstat (limited to 'share')
-rwxr-xr-x | share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh | 16 |
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh b/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh index a92fecb..6ff163d 100755 --- a/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh +++ b/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ # # Invoke this script to edit ${firewall_script}. It will call ${EDITOR}, # or vi(1) if the environment variable is not set, for you to edit -# ${firewall_script}, asks for confirmation and then run +# ${firewall_script}, ask for confirmation, and then run # ${firewall_script}. You can then examine the output of ipfw list and # confirm whether you want the new version or not. # @@ -39,14 +39,14 @@ # flush is present in it). # # If the new rules are confirmed, they'll replace ${firewall_script} and -# the previous ones will be copied to ${firewall_script}.{date}. A mail -# will also be sent to root with the unified diffs of the rule change. +# the previous ones will be copied to ${firewall_script}.{date}. Mail +# will also be sent to root with a unified diff of the rule change. # -# Non-approved rules are kept in ${firewall_script}.new, and you are +# Unapproved rules are kept in ${firewall_script}.new, and you are # offered the option of changing them instead of the present rules when # you call this script. # -# It is suggested improving this script by using some version control +# This script could be improved by using version control # software. if [ -r /etc/defaults/rc.conf ]; then @@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ get_yes_no "Do you want to install the new rules" cat <<! The rules will be changed now. If the message 'Type y to keep the new -rules' do not appear on the screen or the y key is not pressed in 30 -seconds, the former rules will be restored. +rules' does not appear on the screen or the y key is not pressed in 30 +seconds, the original rules will be restored. The TCP/IP connections might be broken during the change. If so, restore the ssh/telnet connection being used. ! @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ DATE=`date "+%Y%m%d%H%M"` cp ${edit_file} ${edit_file}.$DATE mv ${edit_file}.new ${edit_file} cat <<! -The new rules are now default. The previous rules have been preserved in +The new rules are now installed. The previous rules have been preserved in the file ${edit_file}.$DATE ! diff -F "^# .*[A-Za-z]" -u ${edit_file}.$DATE ${edit_file} \ |