Correct (English language) style. No change in (C language) style.

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/share/man/man9/style.9 b/share/man/man9/style.9
index fcb23c6..f8b1335 100644
--- a/share/man/man9/style.9
+++ b/share/man/man9/style.9
@@ -58,12 +58,12 @@ After any copyright header, there is a blank line, and the
 for source files.
 Version control system ID tags should only exist once in a file
 (unlike this one).
-Non-C/C++ source files follow the above example, while C/C++ source files
-follow the below one.
+Non-C/C++ source files follow the example above, while C/C++ source files
+follow the one below.
 All VCS (version control system) revision identification from files obtained
-from elsewhere should be maintained, including if there are multiple IDs
+from elsewhere should be maintained, including, where applicable, multiple IDs
 showing a file's history.
-In general, keep the IDs in tact, including any `$'s.
+In general, keep the IDs intact, including any `$'s.
 Most
 .No non- Ns Fx
 VCS IDs should be indented by a tab if in a comment.
@@ -77,17 +77,17 @@ static const char rcsid[] =
 #endif /* not lint */
 .Ed
 .Pp
-Followed by another blank line.
+Leave another blank line before the header files.
 .Pp
-Kernel include files (i.e. sys/*.h) come first; normally, you'll need
+Kernel include files (i.e. sys/*.h) come first; normally, include
 <sys/types.h>
-OR <sys/param.h>, but not both!  <sys/types.h> includes <sys/cdefs.h>,
+OR <sys/param.h>, but not both.  <sys/types.h> includes <sys/cdefs.h>,
 and it's okay to depend on that.
 .Bd -literal
 #include <sys/types.h>	/* Non-local includes in angle brackets. */
 .Ed
 .Pp
-If it's a network program, put the network include files next.
+For a network program, put the network include files next.
 .Bd -literal
 #include <net/if.h>
 #include <net/if_dl.h>
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ If it's a network program, put the network include files next.
 #include <protocols/rwhod.h>
 .Ed
 .Pp
-Then there's a blank line, followed by the /usr include files.
-The /usr include files should be sorted!
+Leave a blank line before the next group, the /usr include files,
+which should be sorted alphabetically by name.
 .Bd -literal
 #include <stdio.h>
 .Ed
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ to the program go in pathnames.h in the local directory.
 #include <paths.h>
 .Ed
 .Pp
-Then, there's a blank line, and the user include files.
+Leave another blank line before the user include files.
 .Bd -literal
 #include "pathnames.h"		/* Local includes in double quotes. */
 .Ed
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ If a line overflows reuse the type keyword.
 .Pp
 Be careful to not obfuscate the code by initializing variables in
 the declarations.  Use this feature only thoughtfully.
-DO NOT use function calls in initializers!
+DO NOT use function calls in initializers.
 .Bd -literal
 	struct foo one, *two;
 	double three;
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ Use
 .Xr err 3
 or
 .Xr warn 3 ,
-don't roll your own!
+don't roll your own.
 .Bd -literal
 	if ((four = malloc(sizeof(struct foo))) == NULL)
 		err(1, (char *)NULL);