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author | brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> | 2015-06-11 23:05:49 +0000 |
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committer | brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> | 2015-06-11 23:05:49 +0000 |
commit | d837fde0344240b4145346a7d319d804eff5bfde (patch) | |
tree | d9e4300b264e8b559b94ff0dddc24fc73142b9e5 /sbin | |
parent | 750b155101cde8e0c2e8f0b23d6f5ba89ba33f13 (diff) | |
download | FreeBSD-src-d837fde0344240b4145346a7d319d804eff5bfde.zip FreeBSD-src-d837fde0344240b4145346a7d319d804eff5bfde.tar.gz |
Improve grammar.
PR: 200673
Submitted by: Fabian Keil
Obtained from: ElectroBSD
Diffstat (limited to 'sbin')
-rw-r--r-- | sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 | 18 |
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 index 07ac01e..fddc339 100644 --- a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 +++ b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd April 18, 2012 +.Dd June 11, 2015 .Dt GMULTIPATH 8 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -253,13 +253,13 @@ This I/O continues until an I/O is returned with a generic I/O error or a "Nonexistent Device" error. When this occurs, that path is marked FAIL, the next path in a list is selected as active and the failed I/O reissued. -In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O same time. +In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O at the same time. Requests are distributed between paths to equalize load. -For capable devices it allows to utilize bandwidth of all paths. -In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads same time, -but unlike Active/Active only one path handles write requests at any +For capable devices it allows to utilize the bandwidth of all paths. +In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads at the same time, +but unlike in Active/Active mode only one path handles write requests at any point in time. -It allows to closer follow original write request order if above layer +It allows to closer follow the original write request order if the layer above needs it for data consistency (not waiting for requisite write completion before sending dependent write). .Pp @@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ GEOM class is given an opportunity to taste these new devices. If a new device has a .Nm MULTIPATH -on-disk metadata label, the device is used to either create a new +on-disk metadata label, the device is either used to create a new .Nm MULTIPATH -GEOM, or been added the list of paths for an existing +GEOM, or added the list of paths for an existing .Nm MULTIPATH GEOM. .Pp @@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ and .Xr mpt 4 based Fibre Channel disk devices. For these devices, when a device disappears -(due e.g., to a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is +(due to e.g., a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is proactively marked as gone and I/O to it failed. This causes the .Nm MULTIPATH |