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authorbrueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org>2015-06-11 23:05:49 +0000
committerbrueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org>2015-06-11 23:05:49 +0000
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Improve grammar.
PR: 200673 Submitted by: Fabian Keil Obtained from: ElectroBSD
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1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
index 07ac01e..fddc339 100644
--- a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
+++ b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
.\"
.\" $FreeBSD$
.\"
-.Dd April 18, 2012
+.Dd June 11, 2015
.Dt GMULTIPATH 8
.Os
.Sh NAME
@@ -253,13 +253,13 @@ This I/O continues until an I/O is returned with
a generic I/O error or a "Nonexistent Device" error.
When this occurs, that path is marked FAIL, the next path
in a list is selected as active and the failed I/O reissued.
-In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O same time.
+In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O at the same time.
Requests are distributed between paths to equalize load.
-For capable devices it allows to utilize bandwidth of all paths.
-In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads same time,
-but unlike Active/Active only one path handles write requests at any
+For capable devices it allows to utilize the bandwidth of all paths.
+In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads at the same time,
+but unlike in Active/Active mode only one path handles write requests at any
point in time.
-It allows to closer follow original write request order if above layer
+It allows to closer follow the original write request order if the layer above
needs it for data consistency (not waiting for requisite write completion
before sending dependent write).
.Pp
@@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ GEOM class is given an opportunity to taste these new devices.
If a new
device has a
.Nm MULTIPATH
-on-disk metadata label, the device is used to either create a new
+on-disk metadata label, the device is either used to create a new
.Nm MULTIPATH
-GEOM, or been added the list of paths for an existing
+GEOM, or added the list of paths for an existing
.Nm MULTIPATH
GEOM.
.Pp
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ and
.Xr mpt 4
based Fibre Channel disk devices.
For these devices, when a device disappears
-(due e.g., to a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
+(due to e.g., a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
proactively marked as gone and I/O to it failed.
This causes the
.Nm MULTIPATH
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