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author | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-04-11 23:49:16 +0000 |
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committer | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-04-11 23:49:16 +0000 |
commit | c0887ea782ac4eee837d6fc23120167292d94cc0 (patch) | |
tree | 65aab9ffcc7664334be4b815a0069c9aacc1defd /release | |
parent | cfce98c517b5e0f033ef97e157a9b0095ebecb1c (diff) | |
download | FreeBSD-src-c0887ea782ac4eee837d6fc23120167292d94cc0.zip FreeBSD-src-c0887ea782ac4eee837d6fc23120167292d94cc0.tar.gz |
Fix some minor grammar nits. Translators can probably ignore this.
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-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml | 20 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml | 20 |
2 files changed, 20 insertions, 20 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml index 8d92dae..498ae3c 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml @@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ <para arch="i386">The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as - <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged; + <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged; <note> <para>The driver name has changed, but the network interface still - has <quote>ct</quote> name.</para> + has the <quote>ct</quote> name.</para> </note> </para> @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ <para>The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;</para> - <para>A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver + <para>A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver from working has been fixed. &merged;</para> <para>Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ <para>The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.</para> - <para>The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver + <para>The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down the transmission rate. &merged;</para> </sect3> @@ -485,8 +485,8 @@ <para>&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a <option>-f</option> option to work on files instead of disk partitions.</para> - <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> and the - <command>bthidd</command> which support Bluetooth + <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> command and the + <command>bthidd</command> command, which support Bluetooth HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.</para> <para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ &man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.</para> <para>The &man.find.1; now supports a option - <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;</para> + <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;.</para> <para>&man.indent.1; now supports a <option>-ldi</option> option to control indentation of local variables. A number of other @@ -602,17 +602,17 @@ role="package">net/nss_ldap</filename>) and groups with large membership lists.</para> - <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD + <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD, have been added. They also support a <option>-M</option> option to extract values associated with the name list from the specified core instead of the default <filename>/dev/kmem</filename>, and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para> - <para>&man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility. + <para>&man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved. The changes include <option>-p</option> for a list of process IDs, <option>-t</option> for a list of terminal names, - <option>-A</option> which is equivalent with <option>-ax</option>, + <option>-A</option> which is equivalent to <option>-ax</option>, <option>-G</option> for a list of group IDs, <option>-X</option> which is the opposite of <option>-x</option>, and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;. diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml index 8d92dae..498ae3c 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml @@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ <para arch="i386">The &man.ctau.4; driver has been added for Cronyx-Tau synchronous serial adapters. This driver was known for a long time as - <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside &os; source tree. &merged; + <quote>ct</quote> in its previous life outside the &os; source tree. &merged; <note> <para>The driver name has changed, but the network interface still - has <quote>ct</quote> name.</para> + has the <quote>ct</quote> name.</para> </note> </para> @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ <para>The &man.ng.vlan.4; NetGraph node type, which supports IEEE 802.1Q VLAN tagging has been added. &merged;</para> - <para>A bug, which prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver + <para>A bug that prevents VLAN support in the &man.nge.4; driver from working has been fixed. &merged;</para> <para>Several bugs related to &man.polling.4; support @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ <para>The &man.vr.4; driver now supports &man.polling.4;.</para> - <para>The hardware TX checksum support of the &man.xl.4; driver + <para>The hardware TX checksum support in the &man.xl.4; driver has been disabled as it does not work correctly and slows down the transmission rate. &merged;</para> </sect3> @@ -485,8 +485,8 @@ <para>&man.bsdlabel.8; now supports a <option>-f</option> option to work on files instead of disk partitions.</para> - <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> and the - <command>bthidd</command> which support Bluetooth + <para>The <command>bthidcontrol</command> command and the + <command>bthidd</command> command, which support Bluetooth HID (Human Interface Device), have been added.</para> <para>The <command>doscmd</command> utility has been @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ &man.fdread.1; utilities now work on &os;/pc98.</para> <para>The &man.find.1; now supports a option - <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;</para> + <option>-acl</option> to locate files with &man.acl.3;.</para> <para>&man.indent.1; now supports a <option>-ldi</option> option to control indentation of local variables. A number of other @@ -602,17 +602,17 @@ role="package">net/nss_ldap</filename>) and groups with large membership lists.</para> - <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1;, which come from NetBSD + <para>The &man.pgrep.1; and &man.pkill.1; commands, which come from NetBSD, have been added. They also support a <option>-M</option> option to extract values associated with the name list from the specified core instead of the default <filename>/dev/kmem</filename>, and a <option>-N</option> option to extract the name list from the specified system instead of the default kernel.</para> - <para>&man.ps.1; has been improved in the POSIX/SUSv3 compatibility. + <para>&man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved. The changes include <option>-p</option> for a list of process IDs, <option>-t</option> for a list of terminal names, - <option>-A</option> which is equivalent with <option>-ax</option>, + <option>-A</option> which is equivalent to <option>-ax</option>, <option>-G</option> for a list of group IDs, <option>-X</option> which is the opposite of <option>-x</option>, and some minor improvements. For more information, see &man.ps.1;. |