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author | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-03-15 00:24:27 +0000 |
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committer | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-03-15 00:24:27 +0000 |
commit | b9c25c4f01b5469af0a21fa929c0f1df8bf56796 (patch) | |
tree | 5838a5c679f16190c5f50e747e4c7d608fec706b /release | |
parent | 126f7cc74613775c066176595754d198af1b6ce8 (diff) | |
download | FreeBSD-src-b9c25c4f01b5469af0a21fa929c0f1df8bf56796.zip FreeBSD-src-b9c25c4f01b5469af0a21fa929c0f1df8bf56796.tar.gz |
Grammar nits.
Move a SGML comment to a more meaningful (and correct) place in this
file.
Diffstat (limited to 'release')
-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml | 26 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml | 26 |
2 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml index 6a16c3f..16ad138 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml @@ -194,6 +194,8 @@ kernel locking continues, the scheduler will be able to make more efficient use of the available parallel resources.</para> + <!-- Above this line, sort kernel changes by manpage/keyword--> + <para>The device driver infrastructure (as well as many drivers) have been updated. Among the changes: Many more drivers now use automatically-assigned major numbers (instead of the old static @@ -206,16 +208,16 @@ <para>The kernel's file descriptor allocation code has been updated, and is now derived from similar code in OpenBSD.</para> - <para arch="sparc64">On &os;/sparc64 <varname>time_t</varname> + <para arch="sparc64">On &os;/sparc64, <varname>time_t</varname> has been changed from a 32-bit value to a 64-bit value. <note> <para>Since this change is not backward-compatible, - any programs which are built on the older system using - the 32-bit <varname>time_t</varname> as well as - call system-routines for handling + any programs which were built on an older system using + a 32-bit <varname>time_t</varname> and + call system routines for handling <varname>time_t</varname> values, will have to be recompiled. - More detail information and notice on upgrading from + More detailed information and notice on upgrading from the source can be found in <filename>/usr/src/UPDATING.64BTT</filename>.</para> </note> @@ -225,8 +227,6 @@ kernel with the Intel C/C++ Compiler (as in the <filename role="package">lang/icc</filename> port).</para> - <!-- Above this line, sort kernel changes by manpage/keyword--> - <sect3 id="proc"> <title>Platform-Specific Hardware Support</title> @@ -589,14 +589,14 @@ </para> <para><application>pf</application>, OpenBSD's packet filter as of - OpenBSD 3.4 has been imported into &os; source tree and installed + OpenBSD 3.4, has been imported into &os; source tree and is now installed by default. A new user <username>proxy</username>, and two new groups <username>authpf</username> and <username>proxy</username>, - which <application>pf</application> needs are added as well. + which <application>pf</application> needs, are added as well. <note> <para>On upgrading from the source, these user accounts must be - added in advance. And, the <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable + added in advance. The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable in <filename>make.conf</filename> can be used to prevent <application>pf</application> from building.</para> </note> @@ -628,14 +628,14 @@ <sect2 id="ports"> <title>Ports/Packages Collection Infrastructure</title> - <para>The <literal>SIZE</literal> attribute for distfiles - which can be used for checking file size before fetching, + <para>The <literal>SIZE</literal> attribute for distfiles, + which can be used for checking file sizes before fetching, has been added and enabled by default. <varname>DISABLE_SIZE</varname> is a user control knob to disable the distfile size checking. This is especially useful on old &os; versions which didn't have &man.fetch.1; support for this, and for some FTP proxies which always - report incorrect or bogus size.</para> + report incorrect or bogus sizes.</para> </sect2> <sect2 id="releng"> diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml index 6a16c3f..16ad138 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml @@ -194,6 +194,8 @@ kernel locking continues, the scheduler will be able to make more efficient use of the available parallel resources.</para> + <!-- Above this line, sort kernel changes by manpage/keyword--> + <para>The device driver infrastructure (as well as many drivers) have been updated. Among the changes: Many more drivers now use automatically-assigned major numbers (instead of the old static @@ -206,16 +208,16 @@ <para>The kernel's file descriptor allocation code has been updated, and is now derived from similar code in OpenBSD.</para> - <para arch="sparc64">On &os;/sparc64 <varname>time_t</varname> + <para arch="sparc64">On &os;/sparc64, <varname>time_t</varname> has been changed from a 32-bit value to a 64-bit value. <note> <para>Since this change is not backward-compatible, - any programs which are built on the older system using - the 32-bit <varname>time_t</varname> as well as - call system-routines for handling + any programs which were built on an older system using + a 32-bit <varname>time_t</varname> and + call system routines for handling <varname>time_t</varname> values, will have to be recompiled. - More detail information and notice on upgrading from + More detailed information and notice on upgrading from the source can be found in <filename>/usr/src/UPDATING.64BTT</filename>.</para> </note> @@ -225,8 +227,6 @@ kernel with the Intel C/C++ Compiler (as in the <filename role="package">lang/icc</filename> port).</para> - <!-- Above this line, sort kernel changes by manpage/keyword--> - <sect3 id="proc"> <title>Platform-Specific Hardware Support</title> @@ -589,14 +589,14 @@ </para> <para><application>pf</application>, OpenBSD's packet filter as of - OpenBSD 3.4 has been imported into &os; source tree and installed + OpenBSD 3.4, has been imported into &os; source tree and is now installed by default. A new user <username>proxy</username>, and two new groups <username>authpf</username> and <username>proxy</username>, - which <application>pf</application> needs are added as well. + which <application>pf</application> needs, are added as well. <note> <para>On upgrading from the source, these user accounts must be - added in advance. And, the <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable + added in advance. The <varname>NO_PF</varname> variable in <filename>make.conf</filename> can be used to prevent <application>pf</application> from building.</para> </note> @@ -628,14 +628,14 @@ <sect2 id="ports"> <title>Ports/Packages Collection Infrastructure</title> - <para>The <literal>SIZE</literal> attribute for distfiles - which can be used for checking file size before fetching, + <para>The <literal>SIZE</literal> attribute for distfiles, + which can be used for checking file sizes before fetching, has been added and enabled by default. <varname>DISABLE_SIZE</varname> is a user control knob to disable the distfile size checking. This is especially useful on old &os; versions which didn't have &man.fetch.1; support for this, and for some FTP proxies which always - report incorrect or bogus size.</para> + report incorrect or bogus sizes.</para> </sect2> <sect2 id="releng"> |