FDP style nits.

Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

1 files changed, 74 insertions, 62 deletions

diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
index 47c9777..00d6c35 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
@@ -547,24 +547,27 @@
 	  two listening sockets bound to the same port has been
 	  fixed.</para>
 
-	<para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Kernel RPC code, which is a
-	  base of NFS server took multiple optimizations, that significantly
-	  improved its performance and <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
+	<para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Kernel RPC code, which
+	  is a base of NFS server took multiple optimizations, that
+	  significantly improved its performance and
+	  <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
 
-	<para>New kernel-based iSCSI target and initiator code took many
-	  fixes and performance optimizations.</para>
+	<para>New kernel-based iSCSI target and initiator code took
+	  many fixes and performance optimizations.</para>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3 xml:id="disks">
 	<title>Disks and Storage</title>
 
 	<para revision="260385" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
-	  &man.geom.4; subsystem has been updated to support I/O direct dispatch.
-	  When safety requirements are met, it allows to avoid passing
-	  I/O requests to GEOM <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> thread, executing them directly
-	  in the caller context. That allows to avoid CPU bottlenecks in
-	  <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> threads, plus avoid several context switches per I/O.
-	  </para>
+	  &man.geom.4; subsystem has been updated to support I/O
+	  direct dispatch.  When safety requirements are met, it
+	  allows to avoid passing I/O requests to GEOM
+	  <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> thread,
+	  executing them directly in the caller context.  That allows
+	  to avoid CPU bottlenecks in
+	  <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> threads,
+	  plus avoid several context switches per I/O.</para>
 
 	<para revision="260385" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
 	  &man.geom.4; RAID driver has been
@@ -574,9 +577,8 @@
 	  &man.cam.4; subsystem has been updated to support
 	  finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue.
 	  Combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch that allows to
-	  reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym> scalability of the
-	  SCSI/ATA stack.
-	  </para>
+	  reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym>
+	  scalability of the SCSI/ATA stack.</para>
 
 	<para revision="260478">The &man.geom.8;
 	  <literal>GEOM_MULTIPATH</literal> class has been updated to
@@ -585,13 +587,15 @@
 	<para revision="260857">The &man.virtio_blk.4; driver has been
 	  updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
 
-	<para revision="260858">The &man.virtio_scsi.4; driver has been
-	  updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
+	<para revision="260858">The &man.virtio_scsi.4; driver has
+	  been updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
 
 	<para revision="264522">Support for LUN-based CD changers has
 	  been removed from the &man.cd.4; driver.</para>
 
-	<para revision="264732">Support for <literal>BIO_DELETE</literal> has been added to &man.zfs.8; <literal>zvol</literal> volumes.</para>
+	<para revision="264732">Support for
+	  <literal>BIO_DELETE</literal> has been added to &man.zfs.8;
+	  <literal>zvol</literal> volumes.</para>
 
 	<para revision="264734">Support for 9th generation HP host bus
 	  adapter cards has been added to &man.ciss.4;.</para>
@@ -601,35 +605,35 @@
 	  providing support for LSI Fusion-MPT 3 12Gb SCSI/SATA
 	  controllers.</para>
 
-	<para revision="265678">A new <literal>zvol</literal> property <literal>volmode</literal>
-	  and  &man.sysctl.8; <literal>vfs.zfs.vol.mode</literal> has been
-	  added to allow switching <literal>zvol</literal> between three different ways of
-	  exposing it to a user: <literal>geom</literal>,
+	<para revision="265678">A new <literal>zvol</literal> property
+	  <literal>volmode</literal> and  &man.sysctl.8;
+	  <literal>vfs.zfs.vol.mode</literal> has been added to allow
+	  switching <literal>zvol</literal> between three different
+	  ways of exposing it to a user: <literal>geom</literal>,
 	  <literal>dev</literal> and <literal>none</literal>.</para>
 
 	<para revision="265922" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&lsi;">The
-	  &man.mrsas.4; driver has been added,
-	  providing support for LSI MegaRAID SAS controllers.  The
-	  &man.mfi.4; driver will attach to the controller, by default.
-	  To enable &man.mrsas.4; add
-	  <literal>hw.mfi.mrsas_enable=1</literal> to
-	  <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, which turns off
+	  &man.mrsas.4; driver has been added, providing support for
+	  LSI MegaRAID SAS controllers.  The &man.mfi.4; driver will
+	  attach to the controller, by default.  To enable
+	  &man.mrsas.4; add <literal>hw.mfi.mrsas_enable=1</literal>
+	  to <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, which turns off
 	  &man.mfi.4; device probing.</para>
 
 	<note>
-	  <para>At this time, the &man.mfiutil.8; utility and
-	    the &os; version of
-	    <application>MegaCLI</application> and
+	  <para>At this time, the &man.mfiutil.8; utility and the &os;
+	    version of <application>MegaCLI</application> and
 	    <application>StorCli</application> do not work with
 	    &man.mrsas.4;.</para>
 	</note>
 
-	<para revision="266608">Fixed accounting of <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal> operation
-	  in &man.geom.8; <literal>GEOM_DISK</literal> class</para>
+	<para revision="266608">Fixed accounting of
+	  <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal> operation in &man.geom.8;
+	  <literal>GEOM_DISK</literal> class</para>
 
-	<para revision="266610">The &man.gstat.8;
-	  utility now has a <literal>-o</literal> option, to
-	  display "other" operatins (e.g. <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal>).</para>
+	<para revision="266610">The &man.gstat.8; utility now has
+	  a <literal>-o</literal> option, to display "other" operatins
+	  (e.g. <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal>).</para>
 
 	<para revision="267084">The &man.mfi.4; driver has been
 	  updated to include support for unmapped I/O.</para>
@@ -638,8 +642,9 @@
 	  updated with various vendor-supplied bug fixes.</para>
 
 	<para revision="270130" contrib="sponsor"
-	  sponsor="&citrix.rd;">Support for unmapped I/O has been added
-	  to the &man.xen.4; <literal>blkfront</literal> driver.</para>
+	  sponsor="&citrix.rd;">Support for unmapped I/O has been
+	  added to the &man.xen.4; <literal>blkfront</literal>
+	  driver.</para>
 
 	<para revision="259328" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The
 	  &man.geom.8; <literal>label</literal> class is now aware of
@@ -654,15 +659,15 @@
 	  it easier to resize the size of a mirror when all of its
 	  components have been replaced.</para>
 
-	<para revision="262967">Support for MegaRAID Fury cards has been
-	  added to the &man.mfi.4; driver.</para>
+	<para revision="262967">Support for MegaRAID Fury cards has
+	  been added to the &man.mfi.4; driver.</para>
 
 	<para revision="263024">The &man.aacraid.4; driver has been
 	  updated to version 3.2.5.</para>
 
-	<para revision="265536">The <literal>GEOM_VINUM</literal> option
-	  is now able to be built both directly into the kernel or as
-	  a &man.kldload.8; loadable module.</para>
+	<para revision="265536">The <literal>GEOM_VINUM</literal>
+	  option is now able to be built both directly into the kernel
+	  or as a &man.kldload.8; loadable module.</para>
 
 	<para revision="265912">The &man.geom.8;
 	  <literal>GEOM_PART</literal> class has been updated to
@@ -689,33 +694,40 @@
 	  recalculate the user-specified offset and size for alignment
 	  with the disk geometry.</para>
 
-	<para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Many improvements to the
-	  CAM Target Layer (CTL):</para>
+	<para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Many improvements to
+	  the CAM Target Layer (CTL):</para>
 	<itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Support for <literal>UNMAP</literal>, <literal>WRITE SAME</literal>, <literal>COMPARE AND WRITE</literal>, <literal>XCOPY</literal>
-		and some other SCSI commands was added to support VMWare VAAI
-		and Microsoft ODX storage acceleration.</para>
+	    <para>Support for <literal>UNMAP</literal>, <literal>WRITE
+		SAME</literal>, <literal>COMPARE AND WRITE</literal>,
+	      <literal>XCOPY</literal> and some other SCSI commands
+	      was added to support VMWare VAAI and Microsoft ODX
+	      storage acceleration.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para revision="265642"><literal>READ</literal>/<literal>WRITE</literal> size limitations were removed
-		by supporting multiple data moves per command.</para>
+	    <para revision="265642">The
+	      <literal>READ</literal>/<literal>WRITE</literal> size
+	      limitations were removed by supporting multiple
+	      data moves per command.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para revision="268556">Finer-grained per-LUN locking and
-		multiple worker threads for better <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
+	      multiple worker threads for better
+	      <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para revision="269297">Memory consumption reduced by several
-		times by disabling some never used functionality.</para>
+	    <para revision="269297">Memory consumption reduced by
+	      several times by disabling some never used
+	      functionality.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para revision="269298">The maximum number of
-		<acronym>SCSI</acronym> ports increased from 32 to 128</para>
+	      <acronym>SCSI</acronym> ports increased from 32 to
+	      128</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para revision="269429">Improved <literal>zvol</literal> integration for better
-		performance.</para>
+	    <para revision="269429">Improved <literal>zvol</literal>
+	      integration for better performance.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
       </sect3>
@@ -724,10 +736,10 @@
 	<title>File Systems</title>
 
 	<para revision="260338">The
-	  <literal>vfs.zfs.zio.use_uma</literal> &man.sysctl.8; has been
-	  re-enabled.  On multi-CPU machines with enough RAM, this can
-	  easily double &man.zfs.8; performance or reduce CPU usage in
-	  half.  It was originally disabled due to memory and
+	  <literal>vfs.zfs.zio.use_uma</literal> &man.sysctl.8; has
+	  been re-enabled.  On multi-CPU machines with enough RAM,
+	  this can easily double &man.zfs.8; performance or reduce CPU
+	  usage in half.  It was originally disabled due to memory and
 	  <acronym>KVA</acronym> exhaustion problem reports, which
 	  should be resolved due to several change in the VM
 	  subsystem.</para>
@@ -1244,9 +1256,9 @@
       (and snapshots of the various security branches) are supported
       using the &man.freebsd-update.8; utility.  The binary upgrade
       procedure will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as
-      unmodified <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel distributed as a part of an
-      official &os; release.  The &man.freebsd-update.8; utility
-      requires that the host being upgraded have Internet
+      unmodified <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel distributed as
+      a part of an official &os; release.  The &man.freebsd-update.8;
+      utility requires that the host being upgraded have Internet
       connectivity.</para>
 
     <para>Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os;