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| author | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2003-07-29 21:20:44 +0000 |
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| committer | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2003-07-29 21:20:44 +0000 |
| commit | 692df0c6888e351f4effff73b6003722405740f2 (patch) | |
| tree | f368c5f3713c7cba8c29e1a7d4da83d21d61d863 /release/doc | |
| parent | f1458a17002f610078eb4f663fad197bf29ba548 (diff) | |
| download | FreeBSD-src-692df0c6888e351f4effff73b6003722405740f2.zip FreeBSD-src-692df0c6888e351f4effff73b6003722405740f2.tar.gz | |
Fix grammar nits.
Diffstat (limited to 'release/doc')
| -rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml | 16 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml | 16 |
2 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml index 5c86b03..dad0591 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml @@ -201,21 +201,21 @@ <title>Network Protocols</title> <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support comma-separated address lists - (like <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>), - and allows spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable. + (such as <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>), + and allow spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable. &merged;</para> - <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comment. - The comment is stored together with the rule and appears using - &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command. + <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comments. + Each comment is stored together with its rule and appears using + the &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command. &merged;</para> - <para>&man.ipfw.8; now allows to modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31, + <para>&man.ipfw.8; can now modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31, which was read-only and used for the default rules. They can be deleted by <command>ipfw delete set 31</command> command but are not deleted - by <command>ipfw flush</command> command. - So this implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent + by the <command>ipfw flush</command> command. + This implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent rules</quote>. More details can be found in &man.ipfw.8;. &merged;</para> diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml index 5c86b03..dad0591 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml @@ -201,21 +201,21 @@ <title>Network Protocols</title> <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support comma-separated address lists - (like <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>), - and allows spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable. + (such as <literal>1.2.3.4, 5.6.7.8/30, 9.10.11.12/22</literal>), + and allow spaces after commas to make lists of addresses more readable. &merged;</para> - <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comment. - The comment is stored together with the rule and appears using - &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command. + <para>&man.ipfw.4; rules now support C++-style comments. + Each comment is stored together with its rule and appears using + the &man.ipfw.8; <literal>show</literal> command. &merged;</para> - <para>&man.ipfw.8; now allows to modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31, + <para>&man.ipfw.8; can now modify &man.ipfw.4; rules in set 31, which was read-only and used for the default rules. They can be deleted by <command>ipfw delete set 31</command> command but are not deleted - by <command>ipfw flush</command> command. - So this implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent + by the <command>ipfw flush</command> command. + This implements a flexible form of <quote>persistent rules</quote>. More details can be found in &man.ipfw.8;. &merged;</para> |
