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author | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2001-07-16 22:23:07 +0000 |
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committer | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2001-07-16 22:23:07 +0000 |
commit | 33afa195dd579bcc0900c9cd4b3957c90f1c9cfb (patch) | |
tree | 5ec7450a6f4f7a06f9d178ca13b99ab7d8f2a242 /release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata | |
parent | 1104311170ee7cf774b324f7f0804abba6a2cb31 (diff) | |
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Minor tweaks, mostly for style.
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diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata/article.sgml index 091e815..e1dc7fe 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata/article.sgml @@ -47,11 +47,14 @@ <!-- XXX Change release.current to release.prev when there's --> <!-- XXX a release on this branch. --> - <para>This document lists errata that pertain to the most - recently-released version of &os; (&release.current;). It includes - both security advisories that pertain this release, as well as - items relating to the software or documentation, discovered after - the release, that could affect its operation or usability. + <para>This document lists errata items for &os; + &release.current;, containing significant information + discovered after the release. This information includes + security advisories, as well as + news relating to the software or documentation + that could affect its operation or usability. An up-to-date + version of this document should always be consulted before + installing this version of &os;. <note> <para>At this time, &release.current; has no errata, because @@ -69,31 +72,34 @@ <sect1> <title>Introduction</title> - <para>If you read no other documentation before installing this - version of &os;, you should <emphasis>read - the errata</emphasis> for this release so that you don't stumble - over problems which have already been found and fixed. Any + <para>This errata document contains <quote>late-breaking news</quote> + about &os; &release.current;. Before installing this version, + it is important to consult this document to learn about + any post-release discoveries or + problems that may already have been found and + fixed.</para> + + <para>Any version of this - <filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename> file actually distributed with the - release is out of - date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the net and - should be consulted as the <quote>current errata</quote> for your + errata document actually distributed with the + release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of + date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and + should be consulted as the <quote>current errata</quote> for this release. These other copies of the errata are located at <ulink - url="http://www.freebsd.org/releases/">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/</ulink>, - as well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this - location).</para> + url="http://www.freebsd.org/releases/"></ulink>, + plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this + location.</para> - <para>Source and binary snapshots of &release.current; also + <para>Source and binary snapshots of &os; &release.branch; also contain up-to-date copies of this document (as of the time of the snapshot).</para> - <para>Any changes to this file are also automatically emailed to the + <para>Any changes to this file will also be emailed to the &a.current;.</para> <para>For a list of all &os; CERT security advisories, see <ulink - url="http://www.freebsd.org/security"></ulink> or <ulink + url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/"></ulink> or <ulink url="ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/CERT/"></ulink>.</para> - </sect1> <sect1> |