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author | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2006-07-01 15:14:37 +0000 |
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committer | bmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org> | 2006-07-01 15:14:37 +0000 |
commit | cfa2c683aec5a35f84bceee2684770146d0eb553 (patch) | |
tree | c0da5fabcb419d734eb5faa868d91e1048f5982c | |
parent | ded2f080b7e72a8bbe4fe09b26f35f931ddbd28c (diff) | |
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More grammar / wording nit fixes, starting in the boot loader section
and continuing through the multimedia support section.
-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml | 32 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml | 32 |
2 files changed, 34 insertions, 30 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml index 4d0b800..947b86d 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml @@ -366,11 +366,11 @@ <para arch="i386,amd64">A new loader tunable <varname>comconsole_speed</varname> to change the serial console speed has been added. - If the previous stage boot loader requested a serial console + If the previous stage boot loader requested a serial console, then the default speed is determined from the current serial port - speed, and otherwise it is set to 9600 or the value of - the kernel option <literal>BOOT_COMCONSOLE_SPEED</literal> - at compile time. &merged;</para> + speed. Otherwise it is set to 9600 or the value of + the <literal>BOOT_COMCONSOLE_SPEED</literal> kernel option. + &merged;</para> <!-- Above this line, order boot loader changes by keyword--> @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ &man.pccbb.4;, and &man.exca.4; drivers are now buildable as kernel modules.</para> - <para>A &man.acpi.dock.4; driver has been added to provide + <para>An &man.acpi.dock.4; driver has been added to provide support for controlling laptop docking station functions via ACPI.</para> @@ -416,9 +416,11 @@ <para>Support for the PadLock Security Co-processor in VIA C3 processors has been added to the &man.crypto.9; subsystem. + More information can be found in the &man.padlock.4; manual + page. &merged;</para> - <para>A bug which prevents the &man.ichsmb.4; kernel module + <para>A bug which prevented the &man.ichsmb.4; kernel module from unloading has been fixed.</para> <para arch="i386,amd64">Dual-core processors (such as the Intel @@ -440,7 +442,7 @@ or at runtime via &man.kldload.8; and releasing the active keyboard. &merged;</para> - <para arch="amd64,i386">The &man.kbdmux.4; driver has been included in the + <para arch="amd64,i386">The &man.kbdmux.4; driver is now included in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel by default. Also, the <quote>Boot FreeBSD with USB keyboard</quote> menu item in the boot loader menu has been removed @@ -461,22 +463,22 @@ <para arch="amd64">The smbios(4) driver support for amd64 has been added.</para> - <para>The tnt4882(4) driver which supports National Instruments - PCI-GPIB card has been added.</para> + <para>The tnt4882(4) driver, which supports the National Instruments + PCI-GPIB card, has been added.</para> <para arch="alpha,amd64,i386,ia64,sparc64">The &man.uart.4; driver has been included in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel by default. - When both &man.sio.4; and &man.uart.4; can handle a serial port, + When both &man.sio.4; and &man.uart.4; can handle a given serial port, &man.sio.4; will claim it.</para> <para>The &man.uart.4; driver now supports LOM (Lights Out Management) - and RSC (Remote System Control) devices as console.</para> + and RSC (Remote System Control) devices as consoles.</para> <para arch="i386">A new loader tunable <varname>hw.apic.enable_extint</varname> has been added. - This tunable can be used not to mask the ExtINT pin on the first - I/O APIC. At least one chipset for Intel Pentium III seems - to need this even though all of the pins in the 8259A's are masked. + This tunable can be used to disable masking of the ExtINT pin on the first + I/O APIC. At least one chipset for the Intel Pentium III seems + to need this, even though all of the pins in the 8259As are masked. The default is still to mask the ExtINT pin.</para> <para arch="i386">Support has been improved for @@ -487,7 +489,7 @@ <sect4 id="mm"> <title>Multimedia Support</title> - <para>The &man.agp.4; driver now supports ATI IGP chipsets. + <para>The &man.agp.4; driver now supports ATI AGP chipsets. &merged;</para> <para>The new midi(4) driver which is based on NetBSD's one diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml index 4d0b800..947b86d 100644 --- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml +++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml @@ -366,11 +366,11 @@ <para arch="i386,amd64">A new loader tunable <varname>comconsole_speed</varname> to change the serial console speed has been added. - If the previous stage boot loader requested a serial console + If the previous stage boot loader requested a serial console, then the default speed is determined from the current serial port - speed, and otherwise it is set to 9600 or the value of - the kernel option <literal>BOOT_COMCONSOLE_SPEED</literal> - at compile time. &merged;</para> + speed. Otherwise it is set to 9600 or the value of + the <literal>BOOT_COMCONSOLE_SPEED</literal> kernel option. + &merged;</para> <!-- Above this line, order boot loader changes by keyword--> @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ &man.pccbb.4;, and &man.exca.4; drivers are now buildable as kernel modules.</para> - <para>A &man.acpi.dock.4; driver has been added to provide + <para>An &man.acpi.dock.4; driver has been added to provide support for controlling laptop docking station functions via ACPI.</para> @@ -416,9 +416,11 @@ <para>Support for the PadLock Security Co-processor in VIA C3 processors has been added to the &man.crypto.9; subsystem. + More information can be found in the &man.padlock.4; manual + page. &merged;</para> - <para>A bug which prevents the &man.ichsmb.4; kernel module + <para>A bug which prevented the &man.ichsmb.4; kernel module from unloading has been fixed.</para> <para arch="i386,amd64">Dual-core processors (such as the Intel @@ -440,7 +442,7 @@ or at runtime via &man.kldload.8; and releasing the active keyboard. &merged;</para> - <para arch="amd64,i386">The &man.kbdmux.4; driver has been included in the + <para arch="amd64,i386">The &man.kbdmux.4; driver is now included in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel by default. Also, the <quote>Boot FreeBSD with USB keyboard</quote> menu item in the boot loader menu has been removed @@ -461,22 +463,22 @@ <para arch="amd64">The smbios(4) driver support for amd64 has been added.</para> - <para>The tnt4882(4) driver which supports National Instruments - PCI-GPIB card has been added.</para> + <para>The tnt4882(4) driver, which supports the National Instruments + PCI-GPIB card, has been added.</para> <para arch="alpha,amd64,i386,ia64,sparc64">The &man.uart.4; driver has been included in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel by default. - When both &man.sio.4; and &man.uart.4; can handle a serial port, + When both &man.sio.4; and &man.uart.4; can handle a given serial port, &man.sio.4; will claim it.</para> <para>The &man.uart.4; driver now supports LOM (Lights Out Management) - and RSC (Remote System Control) devices as console.</para> + and RSC (Remote System Control) devices as consoles.</para> <para arch="i386">A new loader tunable <varname>hw.apic.enable_extint</varname> has been added. - This tunable can be used not to mask the ExtINT pin on the first - I/O APIC. At least one chipset for Intel Pentium III seems - to need this even though all of the pins in the 8259A's are masked. + This tunable can be used to disable masking of the ExtINT pin on the first + I/O APIC. At least one chipset for the Intel Pentium III seems + to need this, even though all of the pins in the 8259As are masked. The default is still to mask the ExtINT pin.</para> <para arch="i386">Support has been improved for @@ -487,7 +489,7 @@ <sect4 id="mm"> <title>Multimedia Support</title> - <para>The &man.agp.4; driver now supports ATI IGP chipsets. + <para>The &man.agp.4; driver now supports ATI AGP chipsets. &merged;</para> <para>The new midi(4) driver which is based on NetBSD's one |