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authorbmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org>2005-03-05 04:53:59 +0000
committerbmah <bmah@FreeBSD.org>2005-03-05 04:53:59 +0000
commitc0add84ce89ea7c73964ccb6031fd720cf829199 (patch)
tree099990293c22acb5c9e18be231efb7e3a83675ef
parent92f843dad23efa5ea40fd8139f6f14179a1958ea (diff)
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Fix a few nits here and there.
-rw-r--r--release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml16
-rw-r--r--release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml16
2 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
index d2f64fb..a32aa63 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.sgml
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@
<title>Hardware Support</title>
<para arch="i386,amd64">The acpi_snc driver,
- which supports Sony Notebook Controller on various
+ which supports the Sony Notebook Controller on various
Sony laptops has been added.</para>
<para arch="sparc64">The &man.auxio.4; driver has been to drive
@@ -549,8 +549,8 @@
variants. &merged;</para>
<para>The <filename>libxpg4</filename> library has been removed
- because all of the functionality was merged into
- <filename>libc</filename> for a long time.
+ because all of its functionality was long ago merged into
+ <filename>libc</filename>.
All binaries linked with <filename>libxpg4</filename>
must be recompiled or use &man.libmap.conf.5;.
Note that the &os; base system has no such binaries.</para>
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@
has been added. &merged;</para>
<para>A separate directory has been added for &man.named.8;
- dynamic zones which is owned by the bind user
+ dynamic zones which is owned by the <username>bind</username> user
(for creation of the zone journal file).
For more detail, see an example dynamic zone in the sample
&man.named.conf.5;. &merged;</para>
@@ -646,9 +646,9 @@
interface has been removed.</para>
<para>The &man.strftime.3; function now supports some GNU extensions
- such as <literal>-</literal>(no padding),
- <literal>_</literal>(use space as padding),
- and <literal>0</literal>(zero padding).</para>
+ such as <literal>-</literal> (no padding),
+ <literal>_</literal> (use space as padding),
+ and <literal>0</literal> (zero padding).</para>
<para>The &man.syslog.3; function is now thread-safe. &merged;</para>
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ ifconfig_net0="inet 10.0.0.1/16"</programlisting>
moused_ums0_flags="-z 4"
moused_ums0_port="/dev/ums0"</programlisting>
- <para>&man.rc.conf.5; now supports <varname>tmpmfs_flags</varname>
+ <para>&man.rc.conf.5; now supports the <varname>tmpmfs_flags</varname>
and <varname>varmfs_flags</varname> variables.
These can be used to pass extra options to the &man.mdmfs.8; utility,
to customize the finer details of the &man.md.4; file system creation,
diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
index d2f64fb..a32aa63 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@
<title>Hardware Support</title>
<para arch="i386,amd64">The acpi_snc driver,
- which supports Sony Notebook Controller on various
+ which supports the Sony Notebook Controller on various
Sony laptops has been added.</para>
<para arch="sparc64">The &man.auxio.4; driver has been to drive
@@ -549,8 +549,8 @@
variants. &merged;</para>
<para>The <filename>libxpg4</filename> library has been removed
- because all of the functionality was merged into
- <filename>libc</filename> for a long time.
+ because all of its functionality was long ago merged into
+ <filename>libc</filename>.
All binaries linked with <filename>libxpg4</filename>
must be recompiled or use &man.libmap.conf.5;.
Note that the &os; base system has no such binaries.</para>
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@
has been added. &merged;</para>
<para>A separate directory has been added for &man.named.8;
- dynamic zones which is owned by the bind user
+ dynamic zones which is owned by the <username>bind</username> user
(for creation of the zone journal file).
For more detail, see an example dynamic zone in the sample
&man.named.conf.5;. &merged;</para>
@@ -646,9 +646,9 @@
interface has been removed.</para>
<para>The &man.strftime.3; function now supports some GNU extensions
- such as <literal>-</literal>(no padding),
- <literal>_</literal>(use space as padding),
- and <literal>0</literal>(zero padding).</para>
+ such as <literal>-</literal> (no padding),
+ <literal>_</literal> (use space as padding),
+ and <literal>0</literal> (zero padding).</para>
<para>The &man.syslog.3; function is now thread-safe. &merged;</para>
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ ifconfig_net0="inet 10.0.0.1/16"</programlisting>
moused_ums0_flags="-z 4"
moused_ums0_port="/dev/ums0"</programlisting>
- <para>&man.rc.conf.5; now supports <varname>tmpmfs_flags</varname>
+ <para>&man.rc.conf.5; now supports the <varname>tmpmfs_flags</varname>
and <varname>varmfs_flags</varname> variables.
These can be used to pass extra options to the &man.mdmfs.8; utility,
to customize the finer details of the &man.md.4; file system creation,
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