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authorgjb <gjb@FreeBSD.org>2014-04-12 20:49:07 +0000
committergjb <gjb@FreeBSD.org>2014-04-12 20:49:07 +0000
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Clean up leading/trailing whitespace.
Rewrap paragraphs and long lines. Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation
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diff --git a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
index cac1089..4e65c18 100644
--- a/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
+++ b/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
@@ -1,14 +1,16 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
- "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
+ "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
<!ENTITY % release PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Release Specification//EN" "release.ent">
%release;
]>
<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
-<info><title>&os; &release.current; Release Notes</title>
-
+<info>
+ <title>&os; &release.current; Release Notes</title>
- <author><orgname>The &os; Project</orgname></author>
+ <author>
+ <orgname>The &os; Project</orgname>
+ </author>
<pubdate>$FreeBSD$</pubdate>
@@ -41,13 +43,13 @@
</legalnotice>
<abstract>
- <para>The release notes for &os; &release.current; contain a summary
- of the changes made to the &os; base system on the
- &release.branch; development line.
- This document lists applicable security advisories that were issued since
- the last release, as well as significant changes to the &os;
- kernel and userland.
- Some brief remarks on upgrading are also presented.</para>
+ <para>The release notes for &os; &release.current; contain
+ a summary of the changes made to the &os; base system on the
+ &release.branch; development line. This document lists
+ applicable security advisories that were issued since the last
+ release, as well as significant changes to the &os; kernel and
+ userland. Some brief remarks on upgrading are also
+ presented.</para>
</abstract>
</info>
@@ -55,30 +57,32 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>This document contains the release notes for &os;
- &release.current;. It
- describes recently added, changed, or deleted features of &os;.
- It also provides some notes on upgrading
- from previous versions of &os;.</para>
-
- <para releasetype="current">The &release.type; distribution to which these release notes
- apply represents the latest point along the &release.branch; development
- branch since &release.branch; was created. Information regarding pre-built, binary
- &release.type; distributions along this branch
- can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para>
-
- <para releasetype="snapshot">The &release.type; distribution to which these release notes
- apply represents a point along the &release.branch; development
- branch between &release.prev; and the future &release.next;.
- Information regarding
- pre-built, binary &release.type; distributions along this branch
- can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para>
-
- <para releasetype="release">This distribution of &os; &release.current; is a
- &release.type; distribution. It can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri> or any of its mirrors. More
- information on obtaining this (or other) &release.type;
- distributions of &os; can be found in the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
- &os;</quote> appendix</link> to the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">&os;
- Handbook</link>.</para>
+ &release.current;. It describes recently added, changed, or
+ deleted features of &os;. It also provides some notes on
+ upgrading from previous versions of &os;.</para>
+
+ <para releasetype="current">The &release.type; distribution to which
+ these release notes apply represents the latest point along the
+ &release.branch; development branch since &release.branch; was
+ created. Information regarding pre-built, binary &release.type;
+ distributions along this branch can be found at <uri
+ xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para>
+
+ <para releasetype="snapshot">The &release.type; distribution to
+ which these release notes apply represents a point along the
+ &release.branch; development branch between &release.prev; and the
+ future &release.next;. Information regarding pre-built, binary
+ &release.type; distributions along this branch can be found at
+ <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para>
+
+ <para releasetype="release">This distribution of &os;
+ &release.current; is a &release.type; distribution. It can be
+ found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri> or
+ any of its mirrors. More information on obtaining this (or other)
+ &release.type; distributions of &os; can be found in the <link
+ xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
+ &os;</quote> appendix</link> to the <link
+ xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">&os; Handbook</link>.</para>
<para>All users are encouraged to consult the release errata before
installing &os;. The errata document is updated with
@@ -87,26 +91,22 @@
information on known bugs, security advisories, and corrections to
documentation. An up-to-date copy of the errata for &os;
&release.current; can be found on the &os; Web site.</para>
-
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="new">
<title>What's New</title>
- <para>This section describes
- the most user-visible new or changed features in &os;
- since &release.prev;.</para>
-
- <para>Typical release note items
- document recent security advisories issued after
- &release.prev;,
- new drivers or hardware support, new commands or options,
- major bug fixes, or contributed software upgrades. They may also
- list changes to major ports/packages or release engineering
- practices. Clearly the release notes cannot list every single
- change made to &os; between releases; this document focuses
- primarily on security advisories, user-visible changes, and major
- architectural improvements.</para>
+ <para>This section describes the most user-visible new or changed
+ features in &os; since &release.prev;.</para>
+
+ <para>Typical release note items document recent security advisories
+ issued after &release.prev;, new drivers or hardware support, new
+ commands or options, major bug fixes, or contributed software
+ upgrades. They may also list changes to major ports/packages or
+ release engineering practices. Clearly the release notes cannot
+ list every single change made to &os; between releases; this
+ document focuses primarily on security advisories, user-visible
+ changes, and major architectural improvements.</para>
<sect2 xml:id="security">
<title>Security Advisories</title>
@@ -227,15 +227,15 @@
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="upgrade">
- <title>Upgrading from previous releases of &os;</title>
-
- <para arch="amd64,i386">Beginning with &os; 6.2-RELEASE,
- binary upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the
- various security branches) are supported using the
- &man.freebsd-update.8; utility. The binary upgrade procedure will
- update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC or
- SMP kernels distributed as a part of an official &os; release.
- The &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires that the host being
+ <title>Upgrading from Previous Releases of &os;</title>
+
+ <para arch="amd64,i386">Beginning with &os; 6.2-RELEASE, binary
+ upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the various
+ security branches) are supported using the &man.freebsd-update.8;
+ utility. The binary upgrade procedure will update unmodified
+ userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC or SMP kernels
+ distributed as a part of an official &os; release. The
+ &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires that the host being
upgraded have Internet connectivity.</para>
<para>Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os;
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